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My writing goals

Term 2

My goal is to move up from 2p to 2a in recount writing

WK2

I wrote a recount about the Cascades tramp and I used personification ...the wind was so cold it whistled across the air. I achieved a 2p

WK4

I wrote about the outstanding carnival and I used a powerful hook...a buzz of rides and colour greeted me.

WK6

In my unassisted recount I wrote about taking the class monkey home and gained 2a which was my goal. YEAH!

WK8

I wrote a report about the Puriri moth and i found out that they are the biggest moth in NZ!!! I achieved a 2a.

Term 3

My goal for this term is to move from 2a to 3b in recount writing.

WK2

this week I wrote a speech about Kids under 15 should not have their own cellphone

WK4

I wrote about a lost dinner party and I got a 3b to 3p I was really surprised

WK6

I wrote a poem and I got a 3b I achieved. my goal was to get from 2a to 3b and I did!!!

WK8




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